It was 12 a.m; I couldn’t pretend to sleep anymore. I got up from my bed and had a refreshing bath, did a small prayer and it was just 12.30. It looked like I’ve been doing things really quick today, “Quite unusual” I told myself. Yes for today is my birthday- my 18th birthday. The day dad promised to give me a gift, a surprise gift, an unexpected one, the best one!!!
I peeped to see whether anyone is awake- mum and dad seemed to be deep asleep. I expected them to wake me up in the morning with their surprise gifts, might be this is too early to expect a gift from them, I should have slept for some more time and should have waited for them, I regretted. Walked to my bed and was holding the window pane wishing to get a glimpse of the morning sun so that I can jump out of my bed and wake mum and dad and ask for my presents.
I felt a warm but wet kiss on my cheek and the sweet voice of my mum saying “Happy Birthday Kishan”…I had slept holding the window pane and the time was 8 a.m. I said “Thanks Mummy” and kissed her back… with my eyes wandering to spot any gift box in her hand. She bent down and picked the box “Is this what you are looking for?” Mum always knew what I wanted….I smiled showing all my teeth to her. “Is dad awake?” I asked, “Ya, he is brushing”
Dad promised me a gift I’d love to have on my 18th birthday…what will the gift be? I had so many things in my mind that I’d love to have, didn’t know which one dad would have picked….I got their blessings and dad gave me that box. It was too big and heavy for a bike key, I was already disappointed.
Hiding my disappointment I opened the box…...I had to pinch myself to confirm that I wasn't dreaming…..It was a mobile phone, not just an ordinary one- the one I have seen those wealthy ones having in their hand, the one I was craving to have, boast to my friends one day, the one I thought I could only use in my dreams!!!! I knew it was pretty expensive. How did dad manage to get that??
“Do you like it?” Dad asked,
“Of course dad, this is the best gift I’ve ever got”
“Hope I kept my promise”
“Yes dad” I smiled again showing all my teeth to him.
The first thing I did is to store my dad’s number as ‘Appa’. Dad did the same too, he stored my number as ‘Son’.
I was the happiest kid on earth.
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I was sleeping beside my wife, when I heard someone knocking the door. She was snoring and this slow and feeble knock didn’t disturb her. I turned the lights on to see the time. It was 12 a.m sharp. I walked down to the door and opened to find no one there. It was pitch dark; I could see nothing. I locked the door and hiding my fear I rushed back to my room. “Heavy blow of winter winds would have created that knocking sound”-I told myself. On my way back I checked Kishan’s room, it was closed.
I slowly entered into my room, making sure not to make any noise at this odd hour and disturb my wife. She was still snoring. “Thank God, I didn’t disturb her” …I bent down to switch off the light when that loud shrieking noise threw me up. For a second I thought my heart stopped beating. Shit!! It was my mobile phone, I was getting a call. It was too late, coz I saw my wife awake with her face as bewildered as mine.
“What’s the time? Who’s calling you at this hour? Why don’t you pick up that phone?” she was questioning without giving me a chance to answer, as she usually does. She passed me the phone, half asleep, with her eyes tightly closed against the light disturbing her. “It could be my boss” I said in a tone that she could have hardly heard, to ensure that I answered her and at the same time didn't disturb her.
It would have been more than a few seconds I’ve been holding the phone in my hand. My wife would have got irritated to find the ringing tone still going and got up to shout at me. I knew how I looked, I should have scared her....I was sweating in the cold winter night, staring at the phone. She came near me “Are you ok? Why are you sweating? Anything wrong?” Again questions…Thank God she didn’t notice me quivering.
I turned the phone towards her and it blinked – ‘Son calling’
Our heads simultaneously turned towards the table where we had left Kishan’s phone, it was still there on the table, and our heads turned again back to my phone. We did that a couple of times, like spectators watching a tennis tournament, heads swinging either side....
I picked Kishan’s phone and checked in the morning….I looked at the ‘dialed numbers’ ....it had 'Appa'. We were sitting still with our mind blank and my wife was weeping slowly.
Yes, we lost our Kishan in a road accident few months ago……
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Real Story ya, Illa Reel Story ya :p Jokes apart, I got a smilar mail Story for Hutch as "It Follows".
Is this based on a real story? If so psycing me out.
i don't think it is a real story.
But well written.
It IS BASED on a real story...happened to my dad's colleague..:)
Its real!!
omg!
Based on a real incident?? Oh my!
Very well written..
wow..very touching..ya have heard similar real incidents...
@vasanthan
yup..:)
@m.flowerr
Thanks...:)
@enigma
Oh...I heard it for the first time..:)
Hi Aarthi,
I'm new down here but I loved what I read! Your blog is fabulous. The posts are fun to read and enjoyable too. Count me in as a regular reader, now onwards!
This was a wonderful story! Wether real or imaginative, it's well written and the style of writing is what makes it fantastic. you're doing a greatttt job!
Keep Blogging!
hey aarthi...that gave me goosebumps...and you say it's real...omg...
@Meghna
Hey thanks for your comments...keep coming and I'll try to keep in interesting always..:)
@Thinking Aloud
He he....thts cool...:)
Hi Aarthi
Sorry for commenting late....
Anyways, it was so beautiful story n while i was reading i just got emotional. So Nice.....
hey, y no updates? busy? all well?
wow u knw i am reading this @ 2.30 A.m, in my offce and i m getting goosebumps,,& a couple of teardrops , waiting to drain down my eyes, but somhow they stopped...
I wd lke to send this story to a couple of my closest of closest frnds bck frm my school days, cos i know those 2-3 of my frnds wd feel th same...
i wd com bk to read more.....
Godbless u.
Indrajit Ghosal , gurgaon.
N write more.
real story?? u mean they actually got a call from their son who was dead??
Hi ,
I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be very good.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog ‘Once Upon a Time’ took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too;
BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run www.rambhai.com where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!
This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)
Cheers,
Wow...Aarthi!!! It was one hell of a story. Never knew you were a literary expert :)
@Sandhya
Hey Sandhya.. Thanks a lot.. Im really really late to come back here and reply.. sorry for that. :)
@m.flowerr
Hey Im doing good. Was occupied due to my new (married)life.. Coming back soon :)
@Indrajit
Thank you. Keep visiting :)
@Arun
I'll leave it to the readers to guess what was real and what was imaginative in this entire story. :)
@Siddharth
Thank for being here. Do keep visiting and hope you like it. :)
touching... you have written it nicely... but how is it possible to get a call from a dead son, if it is real?
@Jaanvi
That is why I said "I'll leave it to the readers to guess what was real and what was imaginative in this entire story. :)"
@ray
I dono how i missed your comment here. Will surely get back to you :)
it gave me goosebumps...very nice Aarthi!
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